tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post1612902878294070618..comments2023-07-02T05:37:57.027-07:00Comments on The Deringer Files: the long slow seduction...dash deringerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10421794314184696296noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-51321483091346988192015-02-24T23:45:44.102-08:002015-02-24T23:45:44.102-08:00There's a song by One Republic. I changed one...There's a song by One Republic. I changed one word in the chorus and now I think it suits you.<br /><br />I did it all.<br />I owned every second that this world could give.<br />Saw so many places, the things that I did<br />With every broken heart,<br />I swear, I lived.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-90196184529749135722010-05-23T02:37:43.644-07:002010-05-23T02:37:43.644-07:00At this point of the story, I guess you have for e...<i>At this point of the story, I guess you have for ever trapped one of those artists whose echo has been with you all this time. That’s why you (or Amanda whispering in your ear) could write brilliant things like: <br /><b>“I let go a sigh... and watch it float away to the other end of the station.” </b>, or <b>“whimsical pieces of poetry drifted in and out of my head” </b>.<br /><br />Sarah, “E”, Diana, Irene, Camille and, of course Amanda and Carmen, have been accompanying you through an ongoing journey. A journey which is letting you make a great discovery: you are all by yourself. Your lovers have become the <b>“unfinished masterpieces”</b> of an unfinished collection which will always be associated to places that you will never be able to visit again; even though they do not gather the musty <b>“smell of Montmartre”</b> (I know what you’re talking about).<br /><br />Keep writing, dear Dash. Record your memories now that you can. If not others, you’ve got a reader: “toi- même” when you are old. Besides, I want you to know that I ‘ve become one of your most passionate fans. </i><br /><br />PS: As I am a teacher, I found several possible mistakes. I know this is my fault :-(. Could you check them for me and tell me if I am wrong? <br /><br />-one or two of them <b>whom</b> found me entertaining enough to stay with me<br />-she and I were definitely not <b>meant be</b> together<br />-and the salvation <b> the I find</b> in the nectar of your … <br />-sitting <b> in </b> that train<br />-Diana, <b> whom </b> today is still very beautifuleMihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17589781496063547392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-10663109856061217792010-04-24T23:01:46.319-07:002010-04-24T23:01:46.319-07:00this is, perhaps. best enjoyed with a few glasses ...this is, perhaps. best enjoyed with a few glasses of wine... and I am very interested in knowing what you think... I love it when a woman gives me all her attention...dash deringerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10421794314184696296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-45336677242377548502010-04-24T13:31:21.791-07:002010-04-24T13:31:21.791-07:00This deserves my whole attention. I've copied,...<i>This deserves my whole attention. I've copied, pasted and printed it so that I can read it comfortably in bed. I'll tell you something then. No time by now.</i>eMihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17589781496063547392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-20310402597458216942010-04-21T03:13:54.001-07:002010-04-21T03:13:54.001-07:00I am reading this to Citizen Cope, gives it an edg...I am reading this to Citizen Cope, gives it an edge- I enjoy my music and reading...<br /><br />I dreamed about you and awoke to an email...Chef Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-24532035750999061292010-04-20T13:12:46.497-07:002010-04-20T13:12:46.497-07:00Entonces...¡Salud y creación, amigo!Entonces...¡Salud y creación, amigo!Isabel Martínez Rossyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03789547774383092934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-28392187737761120002010-04-20T12:51:25.050-07:002010-04-20T12:51:25.050-07:00...las cosas que se me occurren escribir despues d......las cosas que se me occurren escribir despues de dos botellas de vino...dash deringerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10421794314184696296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6151985822850623188.post-90974829801773217712010-04-19T11:31:31.125-07:002010-04-19T11:31:31.125-07:00Interesante y un tanto angustioso relato éste, Das...Interesante y un tanto angustioso relato éste, Dash... lugares, mujeres que van y vienen sentimientos confusos, pérdidas, reencuentros... quizás, simplemente, la vida...Isabel Martínez Rossyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03789547774383092934noreply@blogger.com